开 头 段 ：写 信 原 因 / 写 信 目 的

You wrote that you always felt lonely without your parents living with you.I am writing to offer you some advice.

中 间 段 ：分 析 原 因 / 提 出 建 议

分析原因

提出建议

和父母缺乏联系

每天和父母视频

自身缺乏兴趣爱好

丰富自己的生活

分析原因

In my point of view,two reasons might be contributing to your problem.

On the one hand,you may lack necessary communication with your parents since you don' live in the same city.

On the other hand,chances are that you haven' developed your own interests enough so you have no idea of how to kill your spare time.

提出建议

Here I would like to give you some suggestions.

To begin with,you should have a video call(chat/via vedio) with your parents every day to share your daily life and even troubles with them.

Besides, it is strongly recommended to enrich your life by reading more and experiencing more. In this way, we may make new friends and won't feel lonely any more.

结 尾 段 ：送 祝 福 / 盼 来 信

I sincerely hope it will be of great help for you.

I am looking forward to your reply.

完 整 版

Dear Eric,

You wrote that you always felt lonely without your parents living with you. I am writing to offer you some advice.

In my point of view, two reasons might be contributing to your problem. On the one hand, you may lack necessary communication with your parents since you don't live in the same city. On the other hand, chances are that you haven't developed your own interests enough so you have no idea of how to kill your spare time.

Here l would like to give you some suggestions. To begin with, you should have a video callwith your parents every day to share your daily life and even troubles with them. Besides, it is strongly recommended to enrich your life by reading more and experiencing more. In this way, we may make new friends and won' feel lonely any more.

I sincerely hope it will be of great help for you. I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours

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