The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
下面的计划显示了机场的现址以及明年重建后的情况。
通过选择和报告主要特征来总结信息，并在相关时进行比较。
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8分范文These plans outline the current site of Southwest Airport, and the plans after redevelopment next year. Overall, it is immediately evident that the number of gates will increase, as well as more customer-facing facilities and utilities, including cafes, shops, ATMs, and car hire.Entrance to the airport will remain as is, however additional doors will be fitted. Currently, only one café exists in the Departures area. This will be relocated, allowing space for both check-in and bag drop facilities. In comparison, at present in the Arrivals area, there are no utilities whatsoever. This will be improved to include a café, plus an ATM and area for car hire, which necessitates a small expansion of the building.
Passport control, security, and customs remain unchanged. However, the future floor plans include shops, which will be situated immediately after travellers exit the security section for Departures. Further, the largest alteration will be the creation of a sky train to replace the current pedestrian walkway. Two branching corridors will also be constructed to allows flyers access to the gates. These are to be increased from 8 at present, to 18 after renovations are completed.
写作思路I started by taking notes on each plan, noting the current facilities and what would remain, what would be removed/relocated and what would be added
（我首先对每个计划做了标注，标注了当前的设施和将保留的设施，将移除/迁移的设施以及将添加的设施）.
I decided the first paragraph would discuss the current plans from the entrance up to the customs area, discussing what would be changed and/or added. The second paragraph would focus on the changes after the customs area
（我决定第一段将讨论从入口到海关区域的当前计划，讨论将要更改和/或添加的内容。第二段将侧重于关税区之后的变化）.
内容首段
Entrance in same place but more doors
入口在同一个地方，但有