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尊敬的先生或女士:
今年4月2日至11日的假期期间我曾住在贵饭店。我写信是为了表达对于贵饭店服务的不满。
尽管贵饭店被评为五星级饭店,但我发现客房并非每天都有人打扫,我的床每三天才被整理一次。此外,餐厅的食物也同样令人失望。不但价格过高,而且质量很差。因此我被迫外出在当地饭店就餐。
我相信您会认真对待我的投诉,并会在将来尽力改善饭店的服务。您若给我的账单打个折扣(附上收据),我将非常感谢。期待您得便时尽早给我圆满的答复。
您真诚的,
李明
亮点表达
express表达
dissatisfaction不满
service服务
receive受到
hotel饭店
vacation假期
March三月
although尽管
rate评级
five star五星
clean清洁
on a daily basis每天
make up整理
in addition此外
restaurant饭店
similarly同样地
disappointing令人失望的
not only不但
extremely非常
overprice价格过高
quality质量
poor差
therefore因此
be forced to被迫
eat out外出就餐
local当地的
trust相信
complaint投诉
seriously认真地
make every effort to尽力
improve改进
in the future将来
greatly非常
discount折扣
bill账单
receipt收据
enclose附上
favorable圆满的
reply答复
at your earliest convenience尽快
道长点评
2012-2考研写作曾考察过投诉信,投诉网店的电子辞典质量问题。2002年1月四级写作曾考察投诉大学的食堂服务,2004年6月六级写作曾考察投诉书店的服务。投诉信首先要引出你要投诉的内容,其次表达你对此事所带来不便的感受和心情,第二段一般说明投诉原因,第三段提出建议措施或解决方案,最后对有关人员做出的努力表示感谢。
句型拓展
1. We will appreciate your willingness to make up for the loss.我们对您愿意补偿损失表示赞赏。
2. I wish to refer you to an incident which occurred in your restaurant, calling for some remedial actions.我想告知您发生在贵饭店的一件事,希望您采取一些补救措施。
3. I am writing to you in the hope that you could do me a favor to improve the horrible situation.我现在写信给您希望改进现状。
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建议信
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Directions:
Write an email to your university to suggest setting network cables in students’ dormitories.
预测范文
To Whom It May Concern,
As a student at our university, I should first commend you forthe additional computers that you have recently added to the computer rooms. I am writing to you to request thatthe Internet be installed in the dormitories.
As you know,the Internet has become an increasingly important toolat university. Not only do professors require students touse it for research, but much communication is done between professors and students throughemail as well. In addition, some professors are beginning to post their lecture notes online for students to review in their spare time.
While there area few computer labs with Internet access throughout campus, with over 20,000 students living in the dorms, there is a great need formore Internet access areas. Thank you for your time.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
参考译文
致有关人士:
作为本校的一名大学生,我首先很赞赏您最近为机房另外配置电脑的行动。我写信给您恳请在宿舍里安装互联网。
想必您也知道,互联网已经变成大学生活中很重要的一种工具。不仅教授们要求学生们使用网络进行科研调查,而且教授和学生间的很多沟通也是通过电子邮件完成的。此外,有些教授开始将自己的课堂讲义传到网上,供学生们在业余时间复习。
整个学校配备网络的机房数量不多,而住宿学生达两万多名,所以学生对