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2022年10月29日雅思大作文真题参考范文:每个人都应该在学校待到18岁

摘要:上海新航道雅思培训班 小编为大家整理了2022年10月29日雅思大作文真题参考范文:每个人都应该在学校待到18岁,每次考试后新航道雅思 小编会在1-2天内更新雅思机经回忆

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12022年10月29日雅思大作文题目

Everybody should stay at school until 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2022/10/29)

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22022年10月29日雅思大作文范文及解析

Introduction

Living in a society inundated with ferocious competition, young people in modern age are expected to be highly educated and qualified. Accordingly, the proposal to raise the school leaving age until the age of eighteen is propounded, which sparks vigorous contentiousness . While some people have a few reservations, I find myself in staunch agreement with such a movement.

解析

这次的task2又是一道典型的旧题,虽然整体难度并不大,题目中绝 对化的限定词everybody也需要关注;可以通过对比讨论“让所有年轻人18岁前全日制学习”的好处和坏处来展开全文;

Ø inundated with 充斥着;充满

Ø ferocious adj.激烈的;强烈的

Ø accordingly adv. 因此

Ø propound v.提出;提议

Ø contentiousness n.争论;争议

Ø have a few reservations v.持有保留意见

Body 1

Beyond all doubt, ploughing into the study under 18 ,young people are more likely to obtain certain qualifications, laying a solid foundation for their future career prospect. With excellent academic environment and abundant teaching resources in schools, by no means would the students fail to concentrate on the study. In this case, most high school graduates would enjoy strong probability to further their advanced studies in universities and seek for a decent job with their credentials. By this token, attending schools for a longer period of time is definitely a wise investment for the young themselves.

解析

18岁前接受教育可以帮助学生为将来就业打好基础;良好的学习环境,优质的教育资源必然可以让学生更专注于学习,毕业之后

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