双边类大作文，工作类话题

Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

题目来源：剑17Test3大作文

题目大意

一些人认为专业人士比如医生和工程师应该在接受培训的国家工作，其他人认为他们有自由选择工作国家的权利，讨论双方观点并给出自己的观点。

思路解析

这是一道双边类大作文，讨论的是专业人士应该在哪工作的问题。双边类的题目，需要对每个观点分别表达同意或反对，最终的结论就是我的立场，可以是中立（双方都同意或都反对），也可以是单边支持某一方立场。审题时要注意两个限定对象一是“doctors and engineers”，要考虑这些职业的特性；二是“the country where they did their training”，比如接受培训的国家和祖国就是两个概念，如果把爱国作为论点之一就偏题了，因此一定要注意。下面月半鸭和大家一起来看下具体观点。

首先来看前者观点的合理性，有三方面。

一是培养医生、工程师之类的专业人员，往往需要大量的时间和资金的投入。对于国家和社会来说，自然会希望这笔投入能够获得相应回报，即培养的人才能够学成后在当地工作发挥作用。

二是一些专业人士的培养可能会考虑当地的实际需求，比如医生会学习如何诊断和治疗当地的高发疾病，而他们学成后投入工作能为当地更有针对性地解决一些问题。

三是在培养过程中可能会涉及一些核心技术，一旦相关人才毕业后选择去其他国家工作，会导致核心技术泄密，威胁到培养国的安全。

其次我们来看“自由选择工作地点”的合理性，有两方面。

一是很多学生接受相关专业培训的时候，是支付了相应的费用，因此其并没有义务需要在学成之后额外花费时间和精力来回报当地。（可以用来反驳前面第一点）。

二是有些地方虽然培养了医生或工程师，但是当地并没有办法提供合理的就业环境和待遇。因此，有能力的专业人士为了自身发展选择了一个更能体现价值以及获得高收入的国家去工作无可厚非。

提纲

高分范文示例

Certain groups today argue that skilled professionals should be obliged to work in the same location where they received their initial training, while others feel they are owed the right to work anywhere. Despite the benefits of working in the training country, I believe there should also be a right to self-selection.

There are several reasons why professionals like doctors or engineers should continue their careers in training countries. Firstly, the government has allocated abundant resources to developing skilled and experienced personnel, so that they are expected to pay such an investment back. If these professionals relocate with expertise and cutting-edge knowledge, the training country might face the risk of experiencing a stagnation of technology, social change, or even an economic downturn in the long run. Second, since the development of professionals tends to be guided by a nation’s current needs and circumstances, making them remain in training nations could facilitate local development. To be specific, for the training countries where an outbreak occurs, doctors could efficiently propose targeted treatment strategies, and for those nations facing severe pollution, engineers could utilize the acquired knowledge and come up with practical solutions to reverse the trend.

However, having the freedom to choose one’s place of employment is also paramount. On the one hand, some people pay for their own training courses, so they do not have a duty to contribute to the training country. On the other hand, compared with limiting one’s career prospects within one nation, working abroad tends to offer individuals additional occupational opportunities. For example, medical professionals can obtain and study first-hand information on diseases that are specific to a particular locality. In addition, more research results can be obtained if another country can support professionals with advanced facilities.

Taking all the above into consideration, though working in training countries can bring certain benefits to the training country, professionals should be granted the freedom to choose to work anywhere.

相关词汇和语法结构

invest resources: 投入资源

the current needs and conditions of the country: 国家目前的需求和条件

career prospects: 职业前景

first-hand information: 第一手资料

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