（2）所使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性。

（3）上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。

3.评分时，应先根据作答的整体情况确定其所属的档次，然后以该档次的要求来综合衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。

4.评分时还应注意:

（1）词数少于120的，酌情扣分；

（2）单词拼写和标点符号是写作规范的重要方面，评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑，英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受；

（3）书写较差以致影响交际的，酌情扣分。

二、各档次给分范围和要求

第七档（22-25分）

—创造了丰富、合理的内容，富有逻辑性，续写完整，与原文情境融洽度高:

—使用了多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达流畅，语言错误很少，且完全不影响理解:

—自然有效地使用了段落间、句间衔接手段，全文结构清晰，前后呼应，意义连贯。

第六档（18-21分）

—创造了比较丰富、合理的内容，比较有逻辑性，续写比较完整，与原文情境融洽度较高:

—使用了比较多样且恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达比较流畅，有个别错误，但不影响理解:

—比较有效地使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构比较清晰，意义比较连贯。

第五档（15-17分）

—创造了基本合理的内容，有一定的逻辑性，续写基本完整，与原文情境相关:

—使用了比较恰当的词汇和语法结构，表达方式不够多样性，表达有些许错误，但基本不影响理解:

—使用了语句间衔接手段，全文结构比较清晰，意义比较连贯。

第四档（11-14分）

—创造了基本完整的故事内容，但有的情节不够合理或逻辑性不强，与原文情境基本相关:

—使用了简单的词汇和语法结构，有部分语言错误和不恰当之处，个别部分影响理解:

—尚有语句衔接的意识，全文结构基本清晰，意义基本连贯。

第三档（6-10分）

—内容和逻辑上有一些重大问题，续写不够完整，与原文有一定程度脱节:

—所用的词汇有限，语法结构单调，错误较多且比较低级，影响理解:

—未能有效地使用语句间衔接手段，全文结构不够清晰，意义欠连贯。

第二档（1-5分）

—内容和逻辑上有较多重大问题，或有部分内容抄自原文，续写不完整，与原文情境基本脱节:

—所使用的词汇非常有限，语法结构单调，错误极多，严重影响理解:

—几乎没有使用语句间衔接手段，全文结构不清晰，意义不连贯。

第一档0分

—未作答:所写内容太少或无法看清以致无法评判:所写内容全部抄自原文或与题目要求完全不相关。

三、高考评分解读

总体来看，读后续写以读为辅，以写为主，其目标是考查学生的综合语言运用能力。评分标准是评分的依据和绝对标准。

依据评分标准，读后续写主要考查内容创作和语言运用两个方面。评卷时，评卷老师先根据考生所续写短文的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。

阅卷老师在阅卷时，主要考虑以下内容：

1.与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度；

2.内容的丰富性；

3.应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；

4.上下文的连贯性。

应对策略

（1

每篇文章都有各自独特的写作思路，通过精读文章，找到该篇文章的写作线索，例如什么人（who）什么时间(when)在什么地方(where)因为什么(why)做了什么事儿(what)，最后有了什么发展(how)。这样分析有利于考生“顺藤摸瓜”。

（2）仔细审题，明确续写要求。

一般短文后面的“注意”都有对此短文续写的具体要求，如字数限制、使用几处下划线关键词语、续写段落的首句提示，这样考生能做到“心中有数”。

（3）回扣原文，揣摩续写思路。

根据文章后面的要求，再次快速回读短文，抓住文章的思路，结合段首的提示语，最终确定续写段落的思路，同时结合文章划线词语提示，确定续写段落的内容。

（4）拟写草稿，修改错词病句。

在确定了思路和内容之后，最关键的就是结合提示语或者文中划线的关键词语拟写草稿。拟写时，注意句子结构的多样性、语言的丰富性，并通过句与句之间连接词的正确使用，使上下文连贯。

（5）标出续写部分中使用到的原材料中标有下划线的关键词语。

这一点可以帮助考生检查关键词语的使用情况并根据情况做出修改。最后在誊写文字时，务必做到“字迹工整、清晰”。

真题回顾

浙江卷读后续写：

浙江卷读后续写以遇险类话题为主，但是2021年开始转移到情感话题，侧重亲情和友情，后期备考中可以适当练习情感相关的写作。其 要求考生在所给短文的基础上续写，并且结合划线词，构成一篇合理的完整故事。读后续写对学生学习语言知识的综合运用能力有着较高的要求。同时也考查学生们的发散思维能力和创造性思维能力。续写故事时，要求考生读懂文章，然后明白故事的发展进程、前因后果、人物特征和情感等。在此基础上，考生必须沿着文章的思路，根据提供的线索，恰当进行发挥，并且要使用给出的至少5个词语等。故事的结尾也必须符合原文的主题意义。

新高考读后续写：

新高考主要以情感类话题为主，侧重学校生活，人间大爱和亲情。要求考生结合上文，进行一定的情节续写的同时，还要准确把握细节，最后进行主旨的升华。考生只要对继续吻行文规律掌握到位，利用语言知识，是可以把文章续写好的。下面以近几年的话题分类，讲解高考实战题型的出题思路和规律：

一、有标题，情感话题

典例一(2021• 新高考全国I 卷)

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE

The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.

The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.

Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.

注意：1.续写词数应为150左右。

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.

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The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.

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【答案】As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Father’s appearing was like a savior to the two children. Under the guidance of their father, they took positive actions and started all over again. They made the bread and then went on cooking porridge. Father helped them adjust the fire, which was the key to success. It was all right this time. Delicious breakfast was ready. How happy they were!

The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. When their mother saw the delicious and perfect breakfast in front of her, she was very surprised. It was not only the gift, but the love of the children for her that moved her very much. The two children could finish cooking a breakfast, which she didn’t expect. The children said loudly, “Happy Mother’s Day!” Mother hugged them tightly and kissed them again and again.

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