3. 使用关键词造句:
This study is a randomized trial that investigates whether X therapy improved cognitive function in 40 dementia patients from 6 cities in Japan; it reports improved cognitive function. (28字)
4. 删去赘字(如:study of、investigates)以及重复字;连结剩下句子。
This study is a randomized trial that investigates whether X therapy improved cognitive function in 40 dementia patients from 6 cities in China; it reports improved cognitive functionRandomized trial of X therapy for improving cognitive function in 40 dementia patients from 6 cities in Japan (18字)
5. 删去不必要信息后再润色
Randomized trial of X therapy for improving cognitive function in 40 dementia patients from 6 cities in China reports improved cognitive function
Randomized trial of X therapy for improving cognitive function in 40 dementia patients (13字)
或(改写副标,注重在结果)
X therapy improves cognitive function in 40 dementia patients: A randomized trial (12字)